lou88
Hexen
thelma rox
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Post by lou88 on Aug 9, 2005 17:09:57 GMT
cool that sounds like a good idea what does anyone eles think???
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lou88
Hexen
thelma rox
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Post by lou88 on Aug 10, 2005 15:04:03 GMT
how about we start fanfiction about a love triangle between ella thelma and cassie called i dont no..................... rivals
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Post by nikki77 on Aug 10, 2005 22:53:07 GMT
lol, sounds good to me!
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lou88
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thelma rox
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Post by lou88 on Aug 11, 2005 7:33:42 GMT
cool ill start it know
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Post by Fassbender Fan on Aug 11, 2005 16:35:29 GMT
good start Lou - you might wanna check your spelling and grammar though! Good luck with the fic
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lou88
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thelma rox
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Post by lou88 on Aug 11, 2005 17:06:36 GMT
o sorry,im a bit crap with grammer!!!
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Post by Fassbender Fan on Aug 11, 2005 17:45:47 GMT
Don't worry, try typing it in word first and it will automatially underline anything you get wrong, then copy and paste into here if you like.
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lou88
Hexen
thelma rox
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Post by lou88 on Aug 11, 2005 17:48:52 GMT
thanx ill do that nxt time
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Post by DreamDangerously on Aug 12, 2005 9:50:06 GMT
If you haven't checked out the fic guidelines I posted, take a look, it may give you some usefull ideas on writing and can I put my moderator hat on and ask that you don't use any text speak on the board please. It's against the rules.
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lou88
Hexen
thelma rox
Posts: 119
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Post by lou88 on Aug 13, 2005 10:23:49 GMT
does nobody like my fanfiction or something ... IM INSULTED !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by DreamDangerously on Aug 13, 2005 11:50:28 GMT
I can give you some constructive criticism if you like. To be honest it's quite hard to write a follow on post for because, personally speaking, I couldn't figure out the context of the story. Thats the biggest problem really. Is Thelma alive or dead? It is before or after the events of series one? With a bit of editing you could make it clearer and then people might start contributing. I hope that helps. Also you need to clean up the grammar and spelling because personally speaking as someone who's mildly dyslexic I found it hard to read. I can do that for you if you like?
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lou88
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thelma rox
Posts: 119
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Post by lou88 on Aug 13, 2005 11:52:22 GMT
yes please, that would be good.
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Post by DreamDangerously on Aug 13, 2005 11:54:06 GMT
No problem
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lou88
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thelma rox
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Post by lou88 on Aug 13, 2005 11:56:26 GMT
;)thanks love you hehe
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Post by DreamDangerously on Aug 13, 2005 12:03:22 GMT
Aw. No worries. I've sorted the spelling and the grammar out for you, like I said, if I were you I'd add a little at the begining of the story to give us an idea of when it's set or you could even just give a little bit of info before the story, e.g. This fic is set prior to the events of the series. -----or This fic is an alterntive reality fic, where Thelma never died.or whatever you want to do. Hope that helps.
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